a) The oldest Spore - screenshot i know (The cities have no texture XD)!
b) The text is a nice idea, but you should take care of this damaged R!
c) next time you should erase the yellow stuff around the O and in it!
d)"Create. Thrive." Nice but 08/15. Think of some other catchy phrases.
And not so important: e) The "Create. Thrive." maybe have some more contrast - or effects

Those are my points, but otherwise - good papaer, Congratulations!

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