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Old 05-13-2008, 02:27 AM
Flamin Pheonix Flamin Pheonix is offline
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ok if the map is ment too look pretty/modern/clean cut then im not you man. im more of a post apocaliptic style mapper ie broken buildings and barred doors and stuff never really managed anything with a bit of "style". but then again most of the stuff that is in the models section and so for HL2 is for broken down cities so we may have to model new stuff and that'l need somebody who can model and i dont fit the picture.

still ill willingly help if i can

but nice story

i like the gman script sounds just like what youd expect him to say or so. sept for the second bit i think its got sentences with too few gaps for a gman speech needs more pauses.

maybe a bit like this.

Gman: I have taken the freedom to use the memories of an (…) american person who sadly did not survive the battles (…) I hope you understand that I cannot let you see all this by yourself.(...) Don’t be confused by your surroundings, it was very difficult to find someone who fought and survived so long(...) I had to go to Berlin to find him. (...) from here you will have an excellent view over what happened shortly after the combine appeared in the sky(…) I will come back when the time has come (…) but I think you already were expecting that, weren’t you, Dr. Freeman?(...) Welcome Dr. Freeman(...) Welcome to your legacy(...).

muhahaha grim ending
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