That looks pretty cool... But you know what'd look cooler? If that design was displayed on a different background other than just white paper (thus the "real world environment" note).. And also, we want to try and keep the current logo of the site, with the x at the upper left and it looking more similar to what the site logo is, since this is a way to promote the site with interesting and unique content.

You have drawing talent, but it's not about graphic talent per say.. Not tryin to rip ya apart, just letting you and others know what to do and what not to do for future entries.

Thanks!